The link has a typo, it tries to take you to "goldendusl-if" instead of "goldendusk-if." Here's the link I got off their Pinterest, and here's the non-linked url for anyone who doesn't open hyperlinks from strangers (good practice): goldendusk-if.tumblr.com/
At the end after we met your master, where it said that he smacked our head with something, there's an error just after the part that basically says since the sun is setting, we are ready to hit the hay. The only criticism I have is the lack of a page that states 'hey this is the end of the demo.' I thought something went wrong on your end, like something in thw code was typed in wrong. I wouldn't have know that was the end of the demo if I didn't went to the comments. Other than that I did like what I had read though.
I love it, the world, the characters, especially our bestie. The master seem to know who we are. Does the WIP end after we met our master and we talk with H?
I'm looking forward to read more, fantastic work 😍
I am so glad that you liked it and H! Maybe the master does or doesn't know who you are but R is definitely hiding SOMETHING. Thank you so much for reading it!
The WIP does indeed end after the meeting right before the 'flashback' ends, sorry if that wasn't clear!
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tried to go to the tumblr page but it says it doesn’t exist.
The link has a typo, it tries to take you to "goldendusl-if" instead of "goldendusk-if." Here's the link I got off their Pinterest, and here's the non-linked url for anyone who doesn't open hyperlinks from strangers (good practice): goldendusk-if.tumblr.com/
At the end after we met your master, where it said that he smacked our head with something, there's an error just after the part that basically says since the sun is setting, we are ready to hit the hay. The only criticism I have is the lack of a page that states 'hey this is the end of the demo.' I thought something went wrong on your end, like something in thw code was typed in wrong. I wouldn't have know that was the end of the demo if I didn't went to the comments. Other than that I did like what I had read though.
I love it, the world, the characters, especially our bestie. The master seem to know who we are. Does the WIP end after we met our master and we talk with H?
I'm looking forward to read more, fantastic work 😍
Hi!
I am so glad that you liked it and H! Maybe the master does or doesn't know who you are but R is definitely hiding SOMETHING. Thank you so much for reading it!
The WIP does indeed end after the meeting right before the 'flashback' ends, sorry if that wasn't clear!